your voice, your story — shaped to stand out
Guided personal statement writing
Write your way in
Whether you're staring at a blank page or stuck on your fifth draft, we’ll help you find the words that reflect who you are and where you’re headed. With expert coaching, real-life examples, and personalised feedback every step of the way, your story will come to life — clearly, confidently, and with impact.
WHAT'S INCLUDED?
cPersonal statement theory
We’ll kick things off with an in-depth session where you’ll dive into the art of personal statement writing. It’s not just theory — you’ll leave feeling confident, clear on what universities are looking for, and ready to start shaping your story.
cWriting & Editing
Highlighting your achievements, activities, and “why you” can feel overwhelming — but that’s where we come in. At your first consultation, we’ll co-create a strong draft together and guide you through every redraft after that, collaborating via messenger until your final version is ready to submit.
cInterview preparation
Our core value is to empower you through motivation, insider info and live feedback. We’re here for you, every step of the way. We’ll share our expertise and help you prepare for the types of questions you’ll face.
HOW IT WORKS
Here are main steps:
Request your link
Just click a payment link below — we’ll send over your options and simple instructions to get started.
Book your session
Once you’re set, you’ll get a link to choose your time slot. Got a draft or a few questions? Attach them so we can make the most of our time together.
Join the call
We’ll walk you through how scholarships work, what universities really look for, and how to stand out.
Get post consultation support
Send us your drafts after the session — we usually go through up to 7 rounds of feedback to help you polish and finalise everything.
Submit with confidence
Once you’re happy with your essay, hit submit and let us know how it goes. We’ll be cheering for you all the way.
FROM GOALS TO OFFERS - STORIES OF OUR STUDENTS
// ARTEM
story: From “I don’t know what to write” to “I’m ready to apply.”
Artem was applying to a UK boarding school but felt stuck at the very first step — his personal statement. He wasn’t sure how to structure his thoughts, what to include...
FAQ
General questions
What is the Guided Personal Statement Writing service?
This is your chance to tell your story clearly, confidently, and compellingly. With expert support at every step, we’ll help you write a personal statement that reflects who you are, what drives you, and where you want to go next. Whether you’re applying to secondary school, foundation, an undergraduate or postgraduate programme, we’ll guide you through the process so your essay stands out.
Who is this service for?
This service is ideal for:
- Students applying for boarding schools, foundation, undergraduate or master’s degrees
- Anyone struggling to put their story into words
- Applicants who want structure, real examples, and expert feedback
In short: if you want your personal statement to reflect your true potential, we’re here to help.
What’s Included
What does the service include?
Everything you need to get your statement right:
- A 60-minute deep-dive workshop where we break down structure, tone, and strategy
- Access to a bank of real, successful personal statement examples
- Up to 10 rounds of detailed feedback, delivered via Google Docs and video
- Real-time messaging support for ongoing guidance and collaboration
This isn’t just editing — it’s mentorship.
Is interview preparation included?
If your university requires an interview, we’ll help you prepare so you can confidently connect your story and your statement, and speak about both with clarity and impact.
Outcomes
What kind of feedback will I receive?
Every round of feedback is clear, actionable, and tailored to your goals. We’ll focus on structure, storytelling, clarity, and alignment with your course, helping you present your best self on the page.
How will this help me stand out?
Every story is unique. With our support, your personal statement will sound like you, only stronger. You’ll learn to tell your story with purpose, and connect your experience to your future studies in a way that’s authentic, thoughtful, and powerful.
What kind of results can I expect?
Students who work with us walk away with a personal statement that’s ready to go — polished, persuasive, and truly personal. Many receive offers (and scholarships!) from their top-choice universities.
Next steps
How do I get started?
Easy — you can book the service directly or schedule a free 15-minute consultation to talk things through first. We’ll help you figure out your next move.
When should I begin?
Ideally, 3–6 months before your application deadline. Most students need 3-6drafts to get their statement just right — so starting early gives you space to reflect, refine, and feel good about the result.
service FEE
£310
STILL UNSURE WHERE TO START?
Reach out to us at hello@oxfordcomma.uk or book a free 15-minute consultation to talk it through.
Guided personal statement writing
your voice, your story — shaped to stand out
Write your way in
Whether you're staring at a blank page or stuck on your fifth draft, we’ll help you find the words that reflect who you are and where you’re headed. With expert coaching, real-life examples, and personalised feedback every step of the way, your story will come to life — clearly, confidently, and with impact.
WHAT'S INCLUDED?
cPersonal statement theory
We’ll kick things off with an in-depth session where you’ll dive into the art of personal statement writing. It’s not just theory — you’ll leave feeling confident, clear on what universities are looking for, and ready to start shaping your story.
cWriting & Editing
Highlighting your achievements, activities, and “why you” can feel overwhelming — but that’s where we come in. At your first consultation, we’ll co-create a strong draft together and guide you through every redraft after that, collaborating via messenger until your final version is ready to submit.
cInterview preparation
Our core value is to empower you through motivation, insider info and live feedback. We’re here for you, every step of the way. We’ll share our expertise and help you prepare for the types of questions you’ll face.
HOW IT WORKS
You will find it easy to work with us using our simple 5-step approach
Request your link
Just click a payment link below — we’ll send over your options and simple instructions to get started.
Book your session
Once you’re set, you’ll get a link to choose your time slot. Got a draft or a few questions? Attach them so we can make the most of our time together.
Join the call
We’ll walk you through how scholarships work, what universities really look for, and how to stand out.
Get post consultation support
Send us your drafts after the session — we usually go through up to 7 rounds of feedback to help you polish and finalise everything.
Submit with confidence
Once you’re happy with your essay, hit submit and let us know how it goes. We’ll be cheering for you all the way.
FROM GOALS TO OFFERS - STORIES OF OUR STUDENTS
// ARTEM
story: From “I don’t know what to write” to “I’m ready to apply.”
Artem was applying to a UK boarding school but felt stuck at the very first step — his personal statement. He wasn’t sure how to structure his thoughts, what to include...
FAQ
General questions
What is the Guided Personal Statement Writing service?
This is your chance to tell your story clearly, confidently, and compellingly. With expert support at every step, we’ll help you write a personal statement that reflects who you are, what drives you, and where you want to go next. Whether you’re applying to secondary school, foundation, an undergraduate or postgraduate programme, we’ll guide you through the process so your essay stands out.
Who is this service for?
This service is ideal for:
- Students applying for boarding schools, foundation, undergraduate or master’s degrees
- Anyone struggling to put their story into words
- Applicants who want structure, real examples, and expert feedback
In short: if you want your personal statement to reflect your true potential, we’re here to help.
What’s Included
What does the service include?
Everything you need to get your statement right:
- A 60-minute deep-dive workshop where we break down structure, tone, and strategy
- Access to a bank of real, successful personal statement examples
- Up to 10 rounds of detailed feedback, delivered via Google Docs and video
- Real-time messaging support for ongoing guidance and collaboration
This isn’t just editing — it’s mentorship.
Is interview preparation included?
If your university requires an interview, we’ll help you prepare so you can confidently connect your story and your statement, and speak about both with clarity and impact.
Outcomes
What kind of feedback will I receive?
Every round of feedback is clear, actionable, and tailored to your goals. We’ll focus on structure, storytelling, clarity, and alignment with your course, helping you present your best self on the page.
How will this help me stand out?
Every story is unique. With our support, your personal statement will sound like you, only stronger. You’ll learn to tell your story with purpose, and connect your experience to your future studies in a way that’s authentic, thoughtful, and powerful.
What kind of results can I expect?
Students who work with us walk away with a personal statement that’s ready to go — polished, persuasive, and truly personal. Many receive offers (and scholarships!) from their top-choice universities.
Next steps
How do I get started?
Easy — you can book the service directly or schedule a free 15-minute consultation to talk things through first. We’ll help you figure out your next move.
When should I begin?
Ideally, 3–6 months before your application deadline. Most students need 3-6drafts to get their statement just right — so starting early gives you space to reflect, refine, and feel good about the result.
service FEE
£310
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